Write your stories in your head

By Jerry Bellune, Writing Coach

I’ve spent much of my life writing about people caught up in perilous and life-threatening situations.

Driving to the office from an accident, fire, court house or other location, I would write a provocative, short, five- or six-word headline in my head.

Next I composed the opening sentence in my head in 15 words or less. That’s as challenging as a headline. 

Both headline and opening have to grab your readers and hold their attention.

I always made sure my verbs were active and my word choices compelling.

I could count the words and turn prepositions into adjectives, then perhaps eliminate the adjectives.

Finally I had to know how the final sentence – again in 15 words or less – would read. That often was a quote from one of the principle characters that seemed to wrap up the thrust of the article or an allusion to the opening sentence.

You’ve guessed it. I’m a minimalist. Less is more.

My stories tend to be short and to the point. This essay has only 232 words.

That’s how I still write essays, articles and flash fiction. It is a well-established process in my mind.

Whatever way you write, develop a process that works for you. Use it over and over. 

It becomes like the practiced stroke of a golfer or baseball player.

The more you do it, the better you become.

Next: Tune up your ears

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